Hello my name is Tiana i am a student at Pcs in Auckland NZ i am a year 6 i am in KHH with Whaea Sharlee and Whaea Tamzin my favourite subject it reading i would like to hear lots of feedback from other people.
Kia ora Tiana, so good to see you at our Meets last week! You always give 100% to your work and your writing here shows how much you are growing in confidence to share your ideas and thinking. You should be super proud of that! You have used paragraphs well here, bringing new ideas into each one. Remember to reread your writing out loud to check for any words that might be missing. See you Monday!
Kia ora Tiana, so good to see you at our Meets last week! You always give 100% to your work and your writing here shows how much you are growing in confidence to share your ideas and thinking. You should be super proud of that! You have used paragraphs well here, bringing new ideas into each one. Remember to reread your writing out loud to check for any words that might be missing. See you Monday!
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