Hello my name is Tiana i am a student at Pcs in Auckland NZ i am a year 6 i am in KHH with Whaea Sharlee and Whaea Tamzin my favourite subject it reading i would like to hear lots of feedback from other people.
Your maths thinking was nicely set out which made it easy to follow although I was a bit lost with your array of apples and the working out next to it before i realised that maybe you forgot to ammend the array? Your hangi made my mouth water and to go completely natural with the use of leaves would save tonnes of bags. Can't get any greener than that. Well thought out. Your instructions on how to mmake Rainbow pancakes had precise steps to follow which was helpful. My thoughts are that the quantities may have been more helpful next to the ingredients on the ingredients list just so when you shop for it, you don't need to read the whole recipe to find out how much of each thing you need. I really like how you had step by step picture labelled instructions for your rocket. Wish I had of done this. The foods you like to eat were singing out to me, I like kina too especially on fried bread. Awesome mahi this week. Ka mau te wehi Tiana.
Kia ora Tiana,
ReplyDeleteYour maths thinking was nicely set out which made it easy to follow although I was a bit lost with your array of apples and the working out next to it before i realised that maybe you forgot to ammend the array? Your hangi made my mouth water and to go completely natural with the use of leaves would save tonnes of bags. Can't get any greener than that. Well thought out. Your instructions on how to mmake Rainbow pancakes had precise steps to follow which was helpful. My thoughts are that the quantities may have been more helpful next to the ingredients on the ingredients list just so when you shop for it, you don't need to read the whole recipe to find out how much of each thing you need. I really like how you had step by step picture labelled instructions for your rocket. Wish I had of done this. The foods you like to eat were singing out to me, I like kina too especially on fried bread. Awesome mahi this week. Ka mau te wehi Tiana.