Kia ora my name is Tiana and i will be writing 1st person Narritive about the joker a villian so lets go
Hello my name is the joker and my job is to defeat the heros and me being the evil villian i have faced lots of heros but i seem to be better than them i have faced lots of heroes like aqua man, superman, bat girl, Wonder woman and lots more because i am the best villian but one person i have not defeated and my enemy is the riddeler i hate him
My girlfriend is Harley Quinn has tried to defeat wonder woman it was close im not scared of wonder woman because when Harley Quinn and wonder woman were fighting Harley called me in to help her and i knocked wonder woman out what a good match between them What is a villain a villain is someone bad like me and i love defeating the heroes but i dont like them it is quiet hard fighting the heroes because they have all sorts of powers but i have lots of power in me and i can destroy the heroes i am on books and magazines that means i am more powerful and known more
Being a villian is kinda hard fighting all the heroes off and me being the bad person being a villian is not hard at all you just need the strength and the power villians can cause lots of trouble but same as a super hero becuase when the villians are in the city being bad one of the heros could come to save the city and say superman tries to get rid of a villian and he could be using his lazer eyes to catch the bad guy and the lazers hit the buildingds and it destroys it so heroes can be bad to
even tho there might be more super heroes than villians the bad team will still build up there team to defeat the heroes
i hope you guys enjoyed my writing for this week i wrote about the joker because he is my favourite villian question for this week is do you prefer villians or heroes
Kia ora Tiana! What an interesting piece of writing, I did not know that the Joker's girlfriend was Harley Quinn, well I have learnt something from you, thank you! You have written using 1st person perspective very convincingly, by adding in Joker's thoughts about how it is hard to be a villain I feel like he is talking to me. One thing, remember to reread out loud, I think a couple of full stops got missed. Such a great week again Tiana, thank you for all your effort during the week doing your mahi and sharing your ideas during our Meets.
ReplyDeleteKia ora Tiana Ngarea speaking. I thought that was an amazing story while reading this story i could see that a part of my writing became into your story because i wrote that joker knocked out wonder woman and u say that joker knocked out Wonder Woman. My answer for your question is heros because they save and protect the world. Keep up the good writing and work i enjoyed reading this Ka Kite!
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